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lonliness is like a gaping hole in one's heart
out which all hope and joy is drained.
if the solitude persists,
beyond mortal limits,
we shall lose ourselves
and become the living dead,
mere bodies filled with saddness and pain.:(
a poem i came up with while having a conversation on the topic with one of my friends...
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TheEvilOvelords Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
Very true and very nicely written ^^

-Amy
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ShadowSamurott2 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
so sad:( (Sad)  but if lonliness wasn't cursed i should actually keep him
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xxBoneless Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love it.
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RTNightmare Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You spelled a word wrong: it's persists, not persits. Just thought I'd let you know! ;)

Great piece!
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DEANJENO--art Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student General Artist
thanks for the heads up.:)
I really didn't notice that.:p

Glad you liked the piece!:D:D:D
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RTNightmare Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod:
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M-AMIR Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011
Today I had a discussion with a wise man who mentioned his current feelings. His days have passed so quickly. He realized that feeling of loneliness that he couldn't feel in youth. he even had wrote a poem about that feeling, It would fill your eyes with tears.
your words are heart-touching describing the feeling exactly.
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DEANJENO--art Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011  Student General Artist
i believe the worst thing in the world is to be left alone. think about it, even in prisons when a prisoner behaves badly they put him/her in solitary confinement. they use being alone as the worst punishment (not with the intent to kill them though).

lonliness is really sad and i don't wish it for anyone:(
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Jokerman03 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That makes me frowny face. Cheer up :)
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DEANJENO--art Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Student General Artist
:D.
I hope to post another poem this evening or tonight. i wrote it while in school. it's meataphorical.
it refers to something that i personified as well it refers to me personally. it has different meanings depending on how the reader interprets. The object which is being personified seems a valid explanation for the entire poem but only if u know me and see much deeper will u realise its hidden meaning;)

Looks like i've taken a break from sculpting to do poetry!:D
who knows, i may or may not write more poems in the coming days/weeks.

i still need to type up my latest poem and post it here.:)
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