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Drenched in life's sorrow, my own inner pain.
Filled with sadness, contempt and hidden fear.
Longing to be set free from an evil reign.
Longing for someone to tell me they care.

My hurt buried in self condemnation.
My soul poisoned with bitterness and hate.
The tears of affliction be my portion.
A life filled with loneliness my sad fate.

But in the eyes of the world I'm happy.
Radiant and dancing in pure delight.
Filled with love, joy and laughter, you see me.
Angelic and performing what is right.

My façade perfected all on my own.
My true emotions kept from being shown.
This is my FIRST EVER poem written in the form of a sonnet:)

I shall leave the interpretation up to u guys...
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FrozenDaydream Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
oh wow. I really like this. It reminds me of Leo from Pandora Hearts.
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DEANJENO--art Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011  Student General Artist
thanks alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really appreciate you taking the time to post a comment!:woohoo:
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Bebopboy Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011
I like this, we all judge people superficially what we see on the outside, their facade. We also put up facades to hide
our true emotions, insightful poem.
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DEANJENO--art Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011  Student General Artist
it is a sad reality that i myself am guilty of. looks truly are deceiving.

I put on facades daily, and it is primarily through my poetry that i feel comfortable enough to reveal what's in my heart.

sadly most people who "know" me only know part as they believe my facade.
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