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Blood mingled with debris
shower the scorched earth,
as deadly missiles rain down from above.

Amid the dark clouds,
death flies on wings of steel,
seeking bloodshed in the villages below.

"Fire when ready soldier!"
Soldier?? Ha !
You're not a soldier...
but a mere pawn in this devilish game.

Go on..."Bombs away!"
Let the earth be covered in blood.
Let war and destruction reign in this cursed land.

You want war?
I shall give it to you.
The price....your humanity and your very soul.

Bloody hell....that's what this is.
The hell you've created
with your own free will.
How do you like it now?

Families torn apart...
Husbands killed...
Fatherless children...

...it gets better still!:evillaugh:
Whole villages whiped out!
Countries destroyed!!

Yet you want more!!!
Nuclear warfare!!
Ha! Now the fun begins.
When is the next war? Tell me when!

I'll be there knocking at your door.
An angel of death
coming to drag you to hell!

You wanted bloodshed!
You wanted war!
NOW PAY FOR IT WITH YOUR LIFE!!!!:evillaugh:

Come now soldier.
You belong to me.
Let's cause more bloodshed
and reek havoc on your enemies!!!

Let's kill them all!
Man, woman and child...
...all in the name of war!!!

But rest asurred you who seek bloodshed.
I'll be seeking you....
to drag you through the gates of hell...

There i'll torture you...
Over..,
And over again.
but unlike your victims....the torture never ends!!!!:evillaugh:
This is my latest poem and i must say i'm happy with it:D
I'm not some dark evil dude wanting war and murder by the way. However, here's two more "dark" poems, the themes aren't war but there's death in it all the same[link] and [link]
If u wanna read more of my poems that aren't death and bloodshed related:D check out my gallery!:) There's other artwork including sculptures and drawings as well:P

If i in any way offend anyone please forgive me. My intentions were not to do so.

That aside, i hope u 'enjoy' my poem and please feel free to comment.
i want to hear what u readers think:)
plz and thank you:D

I almost forgot....the preview image was done on normal computer paint and DAmuro:D




p.s. if u like this war poem check out my new latest poem[link] It is also war related:)
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BenioxoXox Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
"You want war?
I shall give it to you.
The price....your humanity and your very soul."

Very deep one, I love this one!
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Simpson240 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
This is a very emotional piece, and it certainly gets it's point across. In a sick sort of sense, it flowed well enough and the imagery, as usual with your writing it seems, was outstanding.
I would comment an possible better sentence structure, but.... it was the devil talking, and I'm not sure how to approach that one... so... your off the hook ;)
Again, a very emotional piece, not usually the type of this i would write, or read, but you seem to do it well enough. while I don't see this winning any awards, it's uppity and fun (in a very dark way) so its clear that it wasn't intended to be the best thing ever written.
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Avey13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
the little angry faces are funny :p, but seriously nice visuals, and I like how it sounds like it's the devil saying it
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DEANJENO--art Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Student General Artist
I almost couldn't resist putting those smilies lol!:D I like the little fellows:P
I'm truly glad u enjoyed my poem:D
And yes, it is written to make it sound like the devil or some evil spirit is saying it.
I am truly happy:woohoo: to liked my poem and thanks a million for taking the tme to write a comment.:D:)
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Kanon-MarkII Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Student Filmographer
wow :O very well written
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DEANJENO--art Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student General Artist
thanks:D! I am glad u enjoyed it. i have been writing war poems lately. not sure why:? but i am pleased with the way they're coming out:)
This poem is the first of possible future war related poems.

Thanks again for your awesome comment. it's great to know people like my work:)
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Kanon-MarkII Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Student Filmographer
no prob :) you should do all kinds of genres, cause this one turned out to be really interesting even though it's not your type
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