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I follow you wherever you go.
I wisper in your ear.
I walk miles in your shoe each day.
In the shadows i lurk, always there.

The longer you keep me,
the stonger i grow.
The more you use me,
the weaker you become.

When all is worst,
my work is done.
but i'll stick around
just for fun.

I'll invite all my friends
and enjoy the pity party in your heart.
I'll watch you suffer
and be thankful I did my part.

I'll turn you into my slave
and let your sorrows feed me.
I'll feast on your pain
and laugh at your calamities.

I'll poison your soul
and make you mine.
How can you resist
my devilish smile.:evillaugh:

I go by many names
but in the end the result is the same.
To bring suffering to this dying world.
One unsuspecting soul at a time.

Now can you see past the darkness?
Can you see me for who i am?
I am he who lives in thee.
All the negative emotions...they are me.
hey there guys! :wave: this is my latest poem! hope u all like it and feel free to comment. i wanna know what you people think.

Thanks for taking the time to read my work!:)

p.s. i know i'm seeming super happy but don't let my contrasting mood take away from the poem. I hope you all like and understand it and that it maybe helps or benefits u in some way.
anyway, thanks again for stopping by! :)
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Jokerman03 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ahaha the devilish smile bit, love it.
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DEANJENO--art Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Student General Artist
added that bit after lol. found it funny haha! :D
Dude i'm just really happy right now lol!
I am glad u liked the poem1 :)
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Jokerman03 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You are waaaay too happy over your own work, especially this one haha
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DEANJENO--art Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Student General Artist
dude i'm really sorta happy fight now. :airbourne:
hope this don't take away from people taking my poem seriously. i meant it with seriousness but am just happy at the moment while simultaneously replying to comments. maybe i'll get more serious later lol!
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Jokerman03 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I see I see, well let them know this is a serious poem but you're having a ball at the moment
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tequilapups Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is truly amazing
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DEANJENO--art Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Student General Artist
thank you. :D i am truly glad u liked it. :)
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tequilapups Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a great read
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DEANJENO--art Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Student General Artist
yay!!!:airborne:I am happy you like my work :D
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tequilapups Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well deserved.
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