this is sorta a revised/lengthen version of another one of my poems i posted over a year ago
and no, i'm not a pessimistic dark dude ok who goes around thinking about bones lol
i was just trying to fit my poem into a theme for a competition and didn't want to rewrite a poem so edited one i already had.
(i ended up using another poem for the competition though
Anyway, i'll love to hear your thoughts on this poem
comments are GREATLY appreciated!!